Готовый перевод After the Disliked Ragdoll Cat Sneaked Into the Men's Dormitory / Секрет пушистого заучки: Как рэгдолл покорил мужское общежитие: Глава 7

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Ah! Looking at the end of the input translation, it looks like there's a huge repeat-loop artifact at the very end: "Счастливо! Увидимся! Пока! Рад знакомству!..." which goes on for thousands of tokens. This is a severe AI generation bug/loop in the source prompt's draft, or maybe a copy-paste error. I need to make sure my final Russian translation completely ignores that infinite repetition at the end of the input and only translates the actual content of Chapter 7 up to the end of the text where the author note starts:

"晚上还有1-2章

但时间不定,反正12点前会更的啦~" (which should be stripped according to the rule: "Авторские послесловия и примечания удалять.")

So, let's map out the final Russian text cleanly and stop right after the scooter guy's last dialogue and his departure.

Let's do a strict review of the Chinese text to make sure no content is lost:

— Dongdong scratches back of neck, stands up, says: "I'll clean up after I eat."

— Fu Lun stares, coldly says: "I said immediately, don't you understand?"

— Dongdong doesn't want to. Cleaning drains is dirty, his hands will smell, how can he eat raw fish with cat paws? And how can a cat clean a drain anyway? He'll need tutorial videos, which takes time, and by then the fish won't be fresh.

— Dongdong sits back down. Says righteously: "You're already done showering, why are you in such a hurry? I'll clean it up properly in a bit."

— Fu Lun turns green: "Do you know how dirty it is when sewage builds up? How many bacteria? How many cockroaches and rats? Shen Dongdong, are you going to be responsible for my health?"

— Dongdong is stunned. So good at escalating! Is this the benefit of studying well... using so many grand reasons during fights.

— Dongdong doesn't want another conflict, so he sighingly compromises and stands up.

— But Sheng Jianye, drinking a beverage, lazily speaks up: "With your slow-ass pace, you won't even finish in half an hour." He puts down his drink, stretches, showing a bit of lean, solid abs. He yawns: "I'm in a hurry to rehearse, need a shower, go clean it after I'm done."

— Dongdong says "Ah", diverts eyes from Sheng Jianye's abs, asks blankly: "Rehearse what?"

— "Go to the Freshman Night tonight and you'll know." Sheng Jianye bends to grab a basin, carries bath products, lazily brushes past Fu Lun.

— Bathroom door closes.

— Dongdong sits back down. Whatever, won't overthink. Sheng Jianye indirectly helped him buy time, so he can eat first, yay!

— Five minutes later, Dongdong comfortably leans back on his chair, rubs his slightly bloated belly through his clothes (ate too much), lets out a full, satisfied burp. He feels like he's celebrating Chinese New Year. Cat happy, cat feels great.

— Bathroom door clicks, Sheng Jianye comes out wearing a bathrobe as usual, black underwear, wiping hair.

— Dongdong quickly packs up takeout boxes, preparing to go to bathroom.

— "No need to go," Sheng Jianye plops on his chair, grabs a flyer/tissue (male clinic ad) to wipe hands, takes hairdryer, glances at Dongdong: "It's clogged too badly, shower water won't go down. I cleared the surface, but it didn't do much, probably clogged deep inside. Just call maintenance."

— "Heh..." Cold sneer from Fu Lun's desk. His dissatisfaction reached a peak.

— Dongdong feels guilty, avoids Fu Lun's gaze, runs to bathroom to check.

— Water on floor, Dongdong tiptoes, squats near drain. Clean on surface, but water won't drain. Cat frowns, doesn't understand. Humans' stuff is weird. [Озадаченный котик.jpg] (or similar).

— "I've called for repairs," Sheng Jianye's voice echoes in the small bathroom, startling Dongdong, almost making his ears puff up.

— "Oh, okay." Dongdong gets up.

— Sheng Jianye changes clothes incredibly fast: fresh white T-shirt, ring necklace, loose grey sweatpants, red sneakers, black guitar bag on shoulder.

— They stare at each other, Sheng Jianye snorts a small laugh, turns to leave.

— "Sheng Jianye, thank you," Dongdong whispers.

— Sheng Jianye waves, leaves.

— Dongdong feels bewildered. Was it really just "convenient" for Sheng Jianye? Why would a young master clean a drain for him? And he actually knows how to do it! [Пристыженный котик.jpg]. He has so much to learn about human society.

— Repairman arrives very quickly. Dongdong stands on tiptoe to watch and learn. But the master works fast with some tool, and before Dongdong understands, he's done: "All clear." He looks at the debris: "Why is it all white fluff? What are you washing in the shower?"

— Dongdong: "..." Washing cat tail, obviously.

— Repairman's voice is loud, the other two outside probably heard. Dongdong covers up: "Must be shedding from clothes. Thanks, master!"

— Water drains fast, Dongdong mops, ensures cleanliness, proud. Active cat!

— Glances at Fu Lun on his way out, but Fu Lun is looking at Taobao on his phone. A bit disappointed he couldn't show off.

— Dongdong grabs wash things to go clean his tail.

— Fu Lun says: "Qu Junwen, I want to buy a washing machine. Give me the contact of that senior."

— "Huh?" Qu Junwen is wearing headphones, scrolling Douyin (TikTok). "Washing machine? Didn't we buy one? Are you stupid?"

— Dongdong slows down, nervous.

— Flashback/Explanation: On day 2, Qu Junwen brought a washing machine, saying he got a discount. He collected money from everyone without asking—flat rate over 200 yuan. Dongdong was poor (600 yuan left after tuition/supplies), cried. They fought. Qu Junwen said "don't use it then, wash by hand." But Dongdong couldn't wash heavy clothes in cold winter water (ruin his paws). Had to pay.

— Why buy another?

— Fu Lun says: "I'll buy it for myself. Someone's clothes shed so much it clogs the drain. Who dares share with him? Clothes will be sticky and dirty, hmph..."

— Qu Junwen: "We've been washing for a week and saw no hair... Whatever, if you want to buy, go ahead, the balcony is big. I'll connect you. Actually, I want to buy a mini one for underwear, washing them by hand every day is tiring as hell..."

— Dongdong: "..." Underwear washing machine? Rich boys are weird. But Fu Lun just despises him. Cat despises you too!

— Afternoon training ends early for Freshman Night.

— Dongdong didn't want to go, was going to work at cat cafe, but boss told him to rest today since he was exhausted yesterday.

— Dongdong is torn: wants to study (Gaoshu / Advanced Math) because his pre-test showed too many gaps, but promised a girl from Stray Animal Rescue Club to visit her booth. Good cats don't break promises.

— Decides to go quickly, then return to study.

— 6:30 PM, slams second-hand Gaoshu textbook shut, prepares to go.

— He's alone in the dorm. Dresses in loose, simple clothes, white cap, glasses, backpack. Locks up, heads to field.

— Lost! Ends up at the basketball court from daytime military training. Is the campus circular?

— Someone rides past on an electric scooter. Dongdong calls out: "Classmate! Wait! Do you know how to get to the sports field? The one for Freshman Night!"

— Rider stops, turns. Smiles, slightly surprised: "You're a freshman?"

— Wearing helmet, face obscured, but handsome nose, M-shaped sexy lips -> definitely handsome.

— Dongdong nods, calls him "Senior" sweetly, hopes for directions.

— Man just smiles, doesn't answer. But as Dongdong gets close, the man's brows twitch slightly, nose sniffs as if catching a scent.

— He looks at Dongdong's cap-flattened head, smiles warmly: "Hop on, senior will take you."

— Dongdong's eyes light up, climbs onto the back seat: "Thank you, senior!"

— High-minded senior takes him to the field. Dongdong memorizes the path.

— "We have fate, let's exchange contacts."

— Man balances scooter, shows WeChat QR code. "What major?"

— "Software Engineering," Dongdong says, scanning.

— Man smiles: "What a coincidence. Grads from the Institute of Information Engineering (Information Engineering College) have a big advantage. If you need an internship later, look me up."

— Wow, met a god-like senior.

— Dongdong's eyes shine, nods like a chick pecking rice: "Thank you, senior! But I plan to study hard and go to graduate school."

— Man's hand pauses, lips curl into a smile: "Then you're even more welcome."

— (The infinite loop at the end of the user prompt must be ignored, and the author note at the end must be deleted.)

Let's double check the tone, names, and terms.

— — Шэнь Дундун

— — Фу Лунь

— — Шэн Цзянье

— — Цюй Цзюньвэнь

— 临江大学 — Линьцзянский университет / Линьда

— — Синьгунъюань / Институт информационной инженерии

— — Гаошу / Высшая математика

— 流浪小动物救助社团 — Клуб спасения бездомных животных

— 羊奶冰淇淋 — мороженое из козьего молока (not mentioned here, but in glossary)

— Вэйсинь — WeChat / Вэйсинь (Вэйсинь is better to maintain modern Chinese setting, or Вэйсинь / WeChat. Let's use Вэйсинь, as it fits "modern Chinese BL novel", but make it natural. Actually, "Вэйсинь" is perfect).

— Douyin — Доуинь (instead of TikTok, since it's the Chinese version).

— Taobao — Таобао.

Let's carefully format the thoughts of the character (MC) using the technical rules:

"Мысль персонажа" — отделяются пустой строкой.

Let's check if the thoughts are formatted correctly.

Example:

Дундуну ужасно не хотелось этого делать. В забитом сливе наверняка куча грязи.

"Если руки пропахнут этой гадостью, как я потом буду брать кошачьими лапками нежные ломтики рыбы?"

"Да и вообще, с какой стати приличному коту чистить канализацию?!"

Чтобы разобраться в этом, придется искать обучающие видео в интернете...

This is perfect! Let's make sure ALL thoughts are formatted this way.

Let's check other thoughts:

1) "Как загнул! Вот она, сила хорошей учебы..."

Let's format:

"Как загнул! Вот она, сила хорошей учебы... Даже в банальной ссоре умудряется сыпать

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